Please tell me what you guys think; especially what you think of the ending!
I’m in the living
room, sitting at our small dinning table, and looking through the list I got
yesterday from Salman. I searched every name on that list, and what I learned
is that half of the people listed no longer live here, which reminds me, why is
Faris still living here? He’s a smart guy, he could find a job anywhere in the
world, I don’t think everyone will care about him being sent to jail, right?
What does he really want from me? Revenge? But then what?
After I finished
looking through the list, four names seemed more likely to be interested in
helping Faris, because one of them seemed to always be hungry for money, and a
couple don’t care what happens to them if they get caught; they never lasted a
long time in jail for some reason. They all look different, and looked like
foreigners, a special face strikes me because of his creepy features, he is a
tall, thin man. His right cheek is burned, and he has a three-centimeter long
scar right above his right eye. The remainder of his hair is brown, his eyes
are dark black, and his skin is pale white.
“How’s the research
going?” Dalia asks as she cuts some fruits.
“I’m almost done!” I
reply; my eyes attached to the screen.
“You should finish
quickly and go wash up, because my parents should be here in less than an
hour.”
I looked through for a
few more minutes, put the list on the laptop, and then rushed upstairs to get
ready.
As I’m putting my
shirt on, I hear the doorbell ring. I quickly slip the shirt on, spray a little
perfume, and race downstairs to welcome my Love’s parents.
I am downstairs, with
Dalia, I stop her right before she goes out in the garden to open the door, and
go open it myself. I put on my brown slippers, and head to the entrance under
the bright sun. I greet Dalia’s parents and walk them inside the house.
“Is there a laptop I
could use, I forgot to send an important email?” Dalia’s father says right
before he sits for lunch. I walk towards the laptop, and he follows me. I lift
the laptop for him, and the paper that has the list falls on the ground.
Dalia’s dad stretches down for the paper, and when he is up facing me, I find
him staring at the paper as if he is remembering something, “I know this name.”
He whispers, mostly to himself than to me.
I look at him in
disbelief, how could he know any of them? But I can’t hold the excitement
inside of me, because if he actually did know any of them, it could help us a
lot, “Who and how?”
Dalia's father pauses,
his mind goes far back, reminiscing the days with his son, but then his eye
lids close a little and his pupils darken. He then looks back at me, and shakes
his head, “I don't know what happened between them. But Ali was a very good
friend of Abdullah.” He focuses his eyes back on the name on the list. “I used
to see him every week with my son, then they grew up I guess and went their
separate ways. After I stopped seeing them together, Abdullah seemed to be
lost, like he had no goal, and then he just learned to adjust without his
friend I guess. It's a sad thing to see really good friends to just leave one
another for no particular reason.”
If only my
father-in-law knew that when his son stopped going out with the likes of Ali,
it was something good for him, but I wonder, if Abdullah never changed his path
in life and his friends, would he still be alive?
“Do you know where we
could find him?” Dalia asks interrupting my thoughts, reminding me of the
necklace I found by the entrance of our house, which sets my mind back to where
it should be focused on; her safety.
“Why, what do you need
him for?” He asks.
“Umm-” My mind
freezes, I can't think of any relevant excuse.
“Ali won a competition
that earned him a visit from one of his favorite writers.” Dalia says pointing
at me. Even I believed what she said, but it wasn't enough to trick her father.
“Then how do you not
have his address, shouldn't he have sent it to you when he entered the
competition? How is he expecting you to visit him if you have no idea where he
lives!” Dalia's dad laughs.
“I guess he forgot.” I
play along. “Now,” I say more seriously, “Do you know where we could find him?”
“I know where he used
to live when he was younger, but I don't think he'd still be living there.”
Dalai's father says, but he gives me the address and details anyway.
Later on when our
guests left after sunset, I decide to go to Ali's house. I take the paper that
contained the address out of my pocket, grab my keys from the table and drag my
shaky feet to the door.
“Aren't you forgetting
something?” Dalia asks.
“What?”
She walks towards me,
gives me a gentle kiss, and whispers, “Good luck.” our eyes lock for a minute,
reminding me of the first time we saw each other. I look into the most
beautiful eyes I've seen, and know that I should go find answers for all what's
going on if I want these same eyes to be the last thing my own eyes catch sight
of, “I love you for making my life heavenly.” I murmur.
I walk towards the
door, look at Abdullah's picture, and ask Allah to keep my favorite girl safe
in my absence.
I drive my car slowly
in the quite, and dark neighborhood. The sun has set an hour ago, but the moon
isn't doing a horrible work at taking over the sun's job. When I reach the
given house number, I walk out of the car, and nervously ring the doorbell, once,
twice, thrice - no answer. I really thought that this was the right house! I
start marching towards the door, frustrated, when the door behind me opens.
“Yes?” An angry voice
shouts behind me.
“Are you Ali Al-X?”
“What do you want from
me?”
“You know that
Abdulrahman has been murdered?” I don't have time to waste, and not in the mood
to really care about others' feelings.
His eyes widen, not
only from shock, but I see fury in them as well. His arms spring towards my
chest, and he clutches my shirt with his hands, “Who told you he got murdered?
He just died, okay?” Ali says between his teeth. He then pushes me back, and
walks back into the house.
Right when he is about
to shut the door, I put a hand to stop him, “Look, I don't know why you're
angry and I don't know what secrets you're keeping, but tell me this, do you
know Faris Al-X?”
“Abdulrahman,” I never
mentioned my name to him. “You're at the wrong place. Now leave.”
“You know something -
you probably know what Faris is planning, just tell me what I need to look out
for? Why is he doing all of this to me! Just tell me!” I pleaded my eyes almost
tearing up.
I saw a bit of
sympathy in his eyes, “How do you know Abdullah?” He whispers.
“I'm married to his sister.”
I answer.
His eyes grow in
disbelief, and I could feel his temperature rising, “Go home now, call the
police, and lock up every available entrance in your house. All I can tell you
is that Faris is not a good Muslim.” He doesn't wait for a reaction from me,
but instead he pushes me towards my car.
I race to the house,
with thoughts juggling in my head. What was he talking about? Why has his
expression changed once he knew about Dalia being my wife? What's the need for
all of this security? The police?
What is Faris planning to do? How is he going to even enter the house? All the
doors are locked! He’s not a good Muslim?
What did he exactly mean by that? All of what he said made my heart beat faster
and my brain press harder against my skull. I did the best I can to ignore all
these thoughts, call the police, Malak, and her now husband, Talal and tell
them all to go to my house. Then I dial Dalia's number - no answer. I dial our
house number, and I hear from the other end that the number cannot be accessed.
“Faris, you are NOT taking her away from me!” I shout in the car.
After less than four
minutes, I'm right next to our house. I click the button to open the garage
door, but end up smashing into it because it's too slow to open. I slam the
driving door open and accelerate into the house. When I am in I notice that the
plastic window facing the kitchen is now into pieces. Dalia. I look up front and I see broken furniture. Dalia. I run forward, and see blood on
the ground. Dalia. The next view I
see kills me. Saying that I felt someone dig a knife into my chest would
underrate the pain I felt I'm going through. Fore I saw the most beautiful
girl, lying on shattered glass, her weak maple-green eyes crying for me. Then I
look up, and find the ugliest creature I have ever seen, followed by a tall
skinny man. His right cheek is burned, and he has a three-centimeter long scar
right above his right eye- same man I have seen earlier on the Internet.
“Did you find that
necklace I left by the door? It belonged to a girl I loved and just like how
you took her away from me by sending me to jail; I will take your wife away
from you!”
I look back into
Dalia’s diamond like eyes, which fuel me with more anger. I don't say a thing,
but dive forward, and tackle Faris smashing his head onto the ground. Then the
other man lifts me up, and throws a punch into my stomach. I take it like
nothing has happened, but the pain in my gut says different. I move quickly,
when I see the man glance at Dalia, positioning my body to shield her.
I then wrestle the man
onto the ground, and start throwing punches to his face. He grabs my right
fist, and pulls it down, causing me to fall to the side. Next he pulls me up
again, and throws me right in front of Dalia. He walks up to me, with a knife
in his hand, and strikes, but I roll quickly, and dodge the fatal knife. I
kick-up off the ground, and kick him with a sidekick into the gut, forcing him
to drop the knife. Without thinking, I tackle him into a hard wooden table,
which make him drop in his place.
I rush back to Dalia,
shake her, and she opens her eyes, “You're not going to die, I can't live
without you!” I shout.
I hear a gun reload
and BANG!
Then I hear the gun
drop onto the ground. My whole body freezes and my eyes lock with Dalia's wet
eyes, both of us shocked, and none of us is able to make a sound.
***
In that deadly night I
lost the one who never left my heart and soul, but left me to struggle in this
world alone. Fore I was like a crying bird in deep sorrow, weeping blood, on
the one who was everything to me. His final words “I can't live without you.” Ring in my ears like an echo that will
never leave me for the rest of my life. And still every corner of this house
holds a beautiful memory of him, I will never forget. I close my eyes, and my
thoughts take my back to first time ours eyes locked, and our souls merged,
under the hot sun, when we traded looks of admiration, which then turned into
eternal love. I crack a smile because I know that Allah sent him to a better
place. Then I smile once more for the miracle that is now living inside of me.
Amazing!!, bas why the sad ending??
ReplyDeleteI don't like cliches :D I was going to end it with half of Dalai's face scared but show how Haman would still love her the same despite that. But then I was inspired by the last paragraph and thought ending it like that would be more unexpected o:)
ReplyDeleteone of the best blogs ive ever read , it was worth the waiting for , the last paragraph litrellyy made me cry !! that does not happen much !! i lovedd ittt !!!
ReplyDeleteHahhahaha thank yooouu soooo much walla!!! ^^ And I know right; the last paragraph is so moving mashalla and all the credit goes to Noor for writing the paragraph mashalla! n_n
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